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Renee Faber's avatar

This was awesome! Like a whole novel in one short story. I'd love to read this as long novel!!! My favorite line--"Jonathan, on the other hand, was a being of dust and dullness, as much land as man." Brilliant!

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Nicole Rivera's avatar

Oh thank you so much Renee! When I read it to my husband he asked what my intentions were with the story and I said, “My plan was that I had an assignment and now it’s done!” But he has me thinking there might be more to it. The group echoed the sentiment at the read aloud, so now I’m thinking about it. 🤔

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Renee Faber's avatar

Ooooo, I hope you write it! There is moral dilemma and romance and struggle and love.... all juice for a great novel. :)

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