Wow, you squeezed a lot of story out of that painting! I love your descriptions of the food in the first part of the story. The whole thing – I was right there!
Our limit for the assignment was three pages and I basically took it to the final margin! One of my questions in the follow up call was whether or not that run on sentence describing the food on the table was too over the top because I couldn’t think of any other way to lay it all out. The consensus was that it was okay which was a relief to me because that was a darling I didn’t want to kill. Lol.
Wow, you squeezed a lot of story out of that painting! I love your descriptions of the food in the first part of the story. The whole thing – I was right there!
Our limit for the assignment was three pages and I basically took it to the final margin! One of my questions in the follow up call was whether or not that run on sentence describing the food on the table was too over the top because I couldn’t think of any other way to lay it all out. The consensus was that it was okay which was a relief to me because that was a darling I didn’t want to kill. Lol.